Mental Health Controls Her

She sits and watches happiness,
But feels so sad 
Watching the good, 
Yet, feeling so bad 
Taken over by addiction,
She was given a different path 
Feeling restricted,
Yet, sometimes glad 
Because no one understands
The hard times she’s had.
Mental health controls her

She feels it in her body, soul, and mind
That joy in life is hard to find
Feeling so blind
Remembering the days that she shined
Yet wanting to put it all behind
And get back to the grind.
Mental health controls her

She’s sober from addiction
Yet, she still feels conflicted
It’s like a contradiction
Where is her prescription?
Always in suspicion
Is it real or is it fiction?
Please tell her your opinion.
Mental health controls her

Her happiness lies 
in her children’s eyes
They are her prize
Never ask twice
About the binding ties
With them, she will always rise 
until the day she dies.
She controls her mental health.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/28/2023 6:15:00 PM
"Please tell her your Opinion. Mental health controls her." I took that a a request.
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Date: 9/26/2023 7:02:00 PM
Love the rhyming!!! Keeps me awake. But the subject, Requires help. And God.
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Allison Call
Date: 9/26/2023 7:51:00 PM
More of your poems than not.. require God, and help… but maybe read the whole poem and you would see the ending . Thanks though, glad I caught your attention ;)
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Allison Call
Date: 9/26/2023 7:49:00 PM
Excuse me? Not sure what you mean by “the subject requires help. And god” ? Can u be any more rude and judgemental? Smfh this is poetry…
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