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Mental Captive

it hangs on your wall. a faded black n white wooden photograph probably taken some time back in the 80s. It's one of those bootless thingies a new home owner would cast away, barely even noticing.... but you keep it. like a lost wandering soul ungodly hours find you on twos mumbling ineligible things to the ghost on the wall. you stand there staring at the fading figure it's reprimanding at times it's happy. or annoyed. but defiantly saying nothing. it's in your house. on your wall. it's vivid. alive. existent! but only you can see it. it's draining you, slowly pulling you into it's ghostly world. nobody else can see it nobody can understand 'it's in your mind', they say, '..or you're just delusional'. mad!! so you steer clear from mortals keeping only to yourself screaming, shouting, weeping wishing they could understand or that someone could find you. but you're just one of a kind, a ghost, just like the one on your wall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/23/2016 9:52:00 AM
Beautifully crafted. I enjoyed reading this great poem. Keep them coming :-)
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Earnest Greystar
Date: 4/4/2016 8:22:00 AM
Ahsante. That's very encouraging and you make me want to write more of this.. thengiu wa nyumba
Date: 3/22/2016 2:44:00 AM
Hello SKAT, thanks a lot for the warm welcome. I am very delighted to be here and to meet you and all this other poets. You are all so friendly and I do look forward to making more friends. Well, about me, I am Kenyan and I love poetry. My main interest is in iconoclasm and arcane pacts(feelings and experiences).
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:56:00 PM
Hi Earnest, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with you're poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and you're poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about you'reself if you wish. I would like to be you're newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/22/2016 2:44:00 AM
Hello SKAT, thanks a lot for the warm welcome. I am very delighted to be here and to meet you and all this other poets. You are all so friendly and I do look forward to making more friends. Well, about me, I am Kenyan and I love poetry. My main interest is in iconoclasm and arcane pacts(feelings and experiences).
Date: 3/20/2016 7:06:00 AM
Earnest, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/22/2016 2:51:00 AM
Hello Linda, I sure will check out some of your poetry. I am a deep contemplative guy and my poetry usually alludes to a more deeper and trivial subject than the face value. I would really appreciate some criticism so you may fell free to comment.

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