Michael J. Falotico Poet Tanka

"mended Cracks"

The cracks in my heart

                       can barely be seen by eye

                                                  only felt with words

                       and a reflection of pain

that you have also been through...

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Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2012 at 9:00 PM a deep and sad thought...pd

Deb Wilson September 6, 2010 at 9:58 PM This is so deeply felt makes me shudder...Very good Michael...Take care~Deb

September 6, 2010 at 4:00 PM So much truth in your words. The emotion comes through the lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire September 6, 2010 at 3:12 PM A very moving tanka, Michael. Nearly everyone has experienced the pain of "cracks" in their hearts. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels September 6, 2010 at 6:16 AM I can totally relate to this write Michael.. luv Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong September 6, 2010 at 5:53 AM It is very refreshing to read a poem which is about the sorrow both have shared. It is usually so one sided. Bravo!