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"mended Cracks"

The cracks in my heart can barely be seen by eye only felt with words and a reflection of pain that you have also been through...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:00:00 PM

a deep and sad thought...pd

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/6/2010 9:58:00 PM

This is so deeply felt makes me shudder...Very good Michael...Take care~Deb

Date: 9/6/2010 4:00:00 PM

So much truth in your words. The emotion comes through the lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/6/2010 3:12:00 PM

A very moving tanka, Michael. Nearly everyone has experienced the pain of "cracks" in their hearts. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 6:16:00 AM

I can totally relate to this write Michael.. luv Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/6/2010 5:53:00 AM

It is very refreshing to read a poem which is about the sorrow both have shared. It is usually so one sided. Bravo!