Mend

Now a crumbled mind is left behind
A true deciever to any innocent believer
crulity hits my senses
My body so tense
The tiredness of trying

Misguided loyality of one so pure
A tear has fallen 
Nomore strength has the end 
I will mend my friend
Never again to be left in the cold 

An old gypsie tune 
Never give your all 
as it can be sold 
It was written in the runes 
Many tears ago 

Deception is you within 
Lies that are not disguised 
Emptyness screams 
From what has been 
At first i was never to see
But now a mind is left i set it free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:28 PM
The inner self, self heals after being let down is my take on this clever piece >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Nice expressions of the feelings.
Falotico Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:21 AM
wonderful write.. much feeling expressed
Spence Sr Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:20 AM
I like the sprinkling of internal rhyme and alliteration in this poem. The theme is very potent. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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May 30, 2010 at 6:19 AM
wow !! that is a lot of heart mending you had to accccooommppliisshhhh. Enjoyed the deep passion and message you are pointing out here,..p.d.
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