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Mend

Now a crumbled mind is left behind A true deciever to any innocent believer crulity hits my senses My body so tense The tiredness of trying Misguided loyality of one so pure A tear has fallen Nomore strength has the end I will mend my friend Never again to be left in the cold An old gypsie tune Never give your all as it can be sold It was written in the runes Many tears ago Deception is you within Lies that are not disguised Emptyness screams From what has been At first i was never to see But now a mind is left i set it free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/30/2010 3:28:00 PM
The inner self, self heals after being let down is my take on this clever piece >> James
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:26:00 AM
Nice expressions of the feelings.
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:21:00 AM
wonderful write.. much feeling expressed
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:20:00 AM
I like the sprinkling of internal rhyme and alliteration in this poem. The theme is very potent. Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:19:00 AM
wow !! that is a lot of heart mending you had to accccooommppliisshhhh. Enjoyed the deep passion and message you are pointing out here,..p.d.
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