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Menagerie

Oh, menagerie, like the song of the Mockingbirds, forever changing ripples in pellucid water. My heart beats, chained and caged, yet as wild as your beasts, unable to escape this emotional circus, you the Ring Master and I your sad clown. As vermilion drops infuse the myriad of ache within my throbbing tumultuous breast, my luscious ancestral desire for you weeps fragrant petals for your silky Frangipani skin. Then I look in your eyes and see the dark of twilight settle. 01/11/2018

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Date: 1/18/2018 7:55:00 AM
This is very well written James. Well done! :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/20/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 1/15/2018 9:36:00 PM
I don't know how I just saw this, but you did an amazing job here James. Beautiful! Hugs and smiles :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/16/2018 2:09:00 AM
Hi Akkina, thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 1/13/2018 2:10:00 PM
this is amazing
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James Inman
Date: 1/13/2018 10:50:00 PM
Thanks for the great comment Jack.
Date: 1/13/2018 5:58:00 AM
A Lovely read James :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/13/2018 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Gary.
Date: 1/13/2018 3:22:00 AM
A definite winner for me, Utopia, then twilight fell so emotional! Congratulations James! Have a super weekend... Mick :-)
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James Inman
Date: 1/13/2018 3:28:00 AM
Thanks Mick.
Date: 1/12/2018 9:29:00 PM
nicely done James, congratulations
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James Inman
Date: 1/13/2018 3:27:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 1/12/2018 8:12:00 PM
this is so gorgeous. I don't know if it placed high but it sure deserved too. Congrats for the win I can see you got!
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James Inman
Date: 1/13/2018 3:26:00 AM
Hey Andrea, thank you for the lovely comment, we placed together, just you and I, oh, and 14 others, so romantic.
Date: 1/12/2018 10:16:00 AM
such an atmospheric write well deserving of a fine win... congrats, james!
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James Inman
Date: 1/12/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and lovely comment Nette.
Date: 1/12/2018 4:20:00 AM
Great write James..Congrats on your win
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James Inman
Date: 1/12/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:25:00 PM
Such a sadly beautiful poem, James. Congratulations for your wonderful win. ~Susan
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James Inman
Date: 1/12/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win James!! ~Judy
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James Inman
Date: 1/12/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thank you Judith.
Date: 1/11/2018 5:17:00 PM
Beautifully dark edges, James. Congrats on your win.
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you again Line.
Date: 1/11/2018 4:10:00 PM
Hi James, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2018 7:03:00 PM
Hi Alexis, thank you.
Date: 1/11/2018 2:58:00 PM
congratulations James: You made a nice poem with the given words. SuZ
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne.
Date: 1/11/2018 2:36:00 PM
This is a sad poem my friend, but with a positive last line.. great use of the ten words... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2018 7:01:00 PM
Silent One, it was a pleasure writing for your contest. Thank you for taking your time to host it.
Date: 1/11/2018 10:37:00 AM
Well done, James. GL
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James Inman
Date: 1/11/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 1/11/2018 5:43:00 AM
You wrote this well James..enjoyed reading your poem...best for a win.
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James Inman
Date: 1/12/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for taking your time to read it Vijay.

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