Men Swim

1966
I was just 10 years old when Dad said I
was ready for the Men Only Swim Hour
at the YMCA Downtown where we were
members. He had rehearsed proper
etiquette with me many times and I was
ready, 'Behave as if you are the only
one in the pool, greet other men, and
go about your business, swim laps'

I always most enjoyed the first few 
moments upon entering the pool
area, the heavy, humid air brushing
my freedom, a powerful, strangely
omnipotent sensation, like this feeling
was the natural order for a secret
society of male rulers, inviting me
into their kingdom to experience truth,
if only for an hour.

We were all equally noble, wizened
and wrinkled sages, lithe and muscled
herculeans (my Dad among these)
and me...all here just to freely wet the
whistle, for an hour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Austin Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 12:43 PM
I like your idea of the special moment. Hemingway liked to do this too. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Goff Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Daver! I had trepidations literally baring myself...but always...i choose to speak honestly from my heart...and let the towel fall...good to hear from you...am a big fan! your friend, jim
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 5:19 PM
I love the fact you were on an equal footing with all the others in the pool - great memories and i especially love the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 6:56 AM
To wet your whistle for me means to drink alcohol. Is this a story about swimming at the YMCA, or a swim through in the pub? Either way I enjoyed the read.
Goff Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Yes! Swim thru the local pub! good observation Scott! jimbo
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Jim, I don't remember the YMCA, until i was 20. Everything is different now. I am grateful to read your words today, makes me realize what the world is missing... enjoyed. LINDA
Eastman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 9:39 AM
A great poem about you and your Dad.
DiMino Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Outstanding, delightful read! Brought back found memory of Troop 300 (Scouts), and how the Elks allowed us to use their pool one night a week. Great fun!
Whiting Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:21 PM
i enjoyed reading this poem
Onclaud Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 7:47 AM
jimbo, love the development of your story--dad-child bonding!.. is there a part 2?... dive in!...huggs
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