Men

I sometimes sit and ponder why do all women’s problems all begin with men? Menstruation, Menopause and Mental – oh don’t start me off on them Any of those issues could quickly drive you round the bend I’m grateful I have my hubby he will be with me to the end The men in my life are wonderful I cherish them every day But I’d dearly love to find one with hair that’s turning grey Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that would make my day! Jan Allison 16th June 2014

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/16/2014 9:53:00 PM

very interesting pontification! Men begins a lot of female problems. I call menopause MEN ON PAUSE. B/c men better pause and rethink the situation before messing with a woman on menopause. KEEP plugging away with writing, NO MATTER WHAT, (or who)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2014 11:12:00 PM

LOL Yes we can be strange creatures JS... but where would men be without us LOL. I wont let anyone deter me J S but am looking elsewhere to post too. Keep on writing my friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

Date: 7/1/2014 9:34:00 PM

Jan So funny and cute. Made me chuckle and laugh all the way through cause I've been with my guy 30 years and he still drives me insane. LOL Thank you for the awesome comment on my One Step poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2014 2:06:00 AM

LOL Thanks for the lovely comment Robin. Men ... can't live with em or without them Hugs Jan xxxx

Peter Dome

Date: 6/26/2014 4:44:00 PM

Ha ha, so funny and so clever. I always say I have a woman problem. I can't get one. ha ha. I could dye my hair grey. thanks for making me chuckle loved it.. Pete.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2014 4:50:00 PM

Ohh no Peter it has to be natural i would be able to tell lol - oh I admit I have real a thing about greying men - my husband knows and is still with me after 23 years so I've not found a replacement for him YET lol hugs Jan xxx

Joe Flach

Date: 6/18/2014 5:09:00 PM

Men!! Can't live with them can't get away with killing them! My hair had a race between turning grey and turning loose. Turning loose won out! We men don't mean to cause so much problem, we just don't seem to be able to avoid it, however.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 5:13:00 PM

Shhh Joe its me and my thing about grey haired men - don't say things like that to me pleaseeee LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/18/2014 9:00:00 AM

Hilarious write Jan. Love it! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 10:54:00 AM

Oh thanks Cecilia - its all tongue in cheek and in good humour! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/17/2014 7:29:00 AM

Jan; This is good. I am glad that you have a good husband. Have a blessed day.... Lucilla

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2014 7:36:00 AM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Lucilla. Hugs Jan xxxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2014 4:42:00 PM

Dear Jan, This is very clever and gave me a chuckle. I do believe many women's problems begin with men. I carry a boatload of baggage from them. LOL Glad you have a great hubby! Yes, I think lots of men lose their hair as they age, but to me Paul Newman, Sean Connery and Richard Gere gained more sex appeal when their hair turned silver! Good one, Jan! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 4:57:00 PM

Oh I agree 100% and as for the comments about greying men - can't come quick for me LOL Gosh I wont sleep now and you forgot George Clooney in there too lol

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/16/2014 2:03:00 PM

and men just have to get in on "menage a trois' hmm men are everywhere, if we want to go get a manicure, there is a man there too. lol.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 3:40:00 PM

Get Tim to behave will you Casarah or he will drive you MENTALLLLL hugs Jan xxxxx

Tim Smith
Date: 6/16/2014 3:04:00 PM

Yes we do

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 2:09:00 PM

lol seems like I have missed out on a few - i just chose the ones that drive us mad Casarah :-) hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/16/2014 1:43:00 PM

Yep it's all MENs fault even when you order everything off the Menu....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 1:46:00 PM

Oh I forgot that one LOl hugs Tim XXXXXX

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/16/2014 1:28:00 PM

Ahh Jan! Can't give them all the credit now. It will go to their head, lol. Enjoyed :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 1:39:00 PM

LOl thanks for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxxx