Men

I sometimes sit and ponder why do all women’s problems all begin with men?
Menstruation, Menopause and Mental – oh don’t start me off on them
Any of those issues could quickly drive you round the bend
I’m grateful I have my hubby he will be with me to the end
The men in my life are wonderful I cherish them every day
But I’d dearly love to find one with hair that’s turning grey
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that would make my day!

Jan Allison
16th June 2014

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 16, 2014 at 9:53 PM

very interesting pontification! Men begins a lot of female problems. I call menopause MEN ON PAUSE. B/c men better pause and rethink the situation before messing with a woman on menopause. KEEP plugging away with writing, NO MATTER WHAT, (or who)

Jan Allison

July 16, 2014 at 11:12 PM

LOL Yes we can be strange creatures JS... but where would men be without us LOL. I wont let anyone deter me J S but am looking elsewhere to post too. Keep on writing my friend. Hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

July 1, 2014 at 9:34 PM

Jan So funny and cute. Made me chuckle and laugh all the way through cause I've been with my guy 30 years and he still drives me insane. LOL Thank you for the awesome comment on my One Step poem.

Jan Allison

July 2, 2014 at 2:06 AM

LOL Thanks for the lovely comment Robin. Men ... can't live with em or without them Hugs Jan xxxx

Peter Dome

June 26, 2014 at 4:44 PM

Ha ha, so funny and so clever. I always say I have a woman problem. I can't get one. ha ha. I could dye my hair grey. thanks for making me chuckle loved it.. Pete.

Jan Allison

June 26, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Ohh no Peter it has to be natural i would be able to tell lol - oh I admit I have real a thing about greying men - my husband knows and is still with me after 23 years so I've not found a replacement for him YET lol hugs Jan xxx

Joe Flach

June 18, 2014 at 5:09 PM

Men!! Can't live with them can't get away with killing them! My hair had a race between turning grey and turning loose. Turning loose won out! We men don't mean to cause so much problem, we just don't seem to be able to avoid it, however.

Jan Allison

June 18, 2014 at 5:13 PM

Shhh Joe its me and my thing about grey haired men - don't say things like that to me pleaseeee LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Cecilia Macfarlane

June 18, 2014 at 9:00 AM

Hilarious write Jan. Love it! Hugs

Jan Allison

June 18, 2014 at 10:54 AM

Oh thanks Cecilia - its all tongue in cheek and in good humour! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Lucilla Carrillo

June 17, 2014 at 7:29 AM

Jan; This is good. I am glad that you have a good husband. Have a blessed day.... Lucilla

Jan Allison

June 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Lucilla. Hugs Jan xxxx

Carolyn Devonshire

June 16, 2014 at 4:42 PM

Dear Jan, This is very clever and gave me a chuckle. I do believe many women's problems begin with men. I carry a boatload of baggage from them. LOL Glad you have a great hubby! Yes, I think lots of men lose their hair as they age, but to me Paul Newman, Sean Connery and Richard Gere gained more sex appeal when their hair turned silver! Good one, Jan! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison

June 16, 2014 at 4:57 PM

Oh I agree 100% and as for the comments about greying men - can't come quick for me LOL Gosh I wont sleep now and you forgot George Clooney in there too lol