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Some men can be great fun life and soul of any party others are kind and tender sheltering their loved ones They come in all shapes and sizes the outside packaging not mattering it is what is inside that defines a man making him either a saint or a sinner Men can be very controlling wanting everything their way jealous of allowing any freedom being insecure in themselves A man who is steadfast and true shares with his partner in all now this type of man is a keeper so be sure not to lose him Vain conceited handsome men will not see what is clear too busy checking their appearance to notice what is going on How ever a man comes is moot as once the heart is involved you may as well throw away the rule book as it is obsolete Now you guys may not agree so I will also relate that women are all of the above with added twists and turns You could also accept that as Eve was made from Adam's rib women have a definite advantage when it comes to understanding men

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Date: 11/4/2013 8:12:00 AM
Shadow, you have a grip on the matters at hand. Can't argue one whit with you about us men. The Adam's rib theory also rings pretty much true.
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Date: 11/4/2013 6:51:00 AM
Please get well soon my dear friend. You are in my prayers always.
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Date: 11/3/2013 7:36:00 PM
I have seen many of the types of men you write of and find much truth within your words....nicely penned poem...enjoyed this one :) hugs
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:18:00 PM
I always liked this one from you my friend. Excellently penned work.
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Date: 11/3/2013 3:21:00 PM
Men are from Mars and women from Venus..Enjoyed reading this one today..There are all kinds out there and one who is kind, considerate, helpful, loving, etc. is a much better catch than some of the others..Thanks for the honor of placing your winners' list..Sara
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:25:00 PM
that is why we women rule, shadow... insightful, wonderful stuff!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:30:00 AM
love this thoughtful write : )
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Date: 11/3/2013 7:13:00 AM
Excellent. Well said. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 11/2/2013 1:51:00 AM
Certainly you know men and certainly men cannot understand women, although the word that names you WOMAN= Wif Of Man, tries to hide men's disadvantage. Ha-ha! Great work Shadow!
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:22:00 PM
Beginning from earth and ended in space, loved you fun "women are all of the above with added twists and turns" and the last line. Beautifully done, my beautiful friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:01:00 PM
Good one Shadow, when it comes to men we are not all that complicated. This was fun.
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:13:00 AM
hahaha, the last but one stanza made me laugh aloud, great twists and turns, Shadow
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Date: 11/1/2013 4:07:00 AM
All too true!
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:36:00 AM
the ending of this was a great way to sum it up. I sure enjoyed this one.
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Date: 10/31/2013 4:47:00 PM
Oh yes, like this Shadow,,
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Date: 10/31/2013 2:21:00 PM
Kudos for your last line, Shadow. Friend, JM
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:46:00 PM
- Agree with your words --- from beginning to end Shadow!! - Well written!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 10/31/2013 1:24:00 PM
hi Anne I just read your new work its excellent Ty for enjoying this Shadow x smile

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