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Memory's Bridge

What does he dream going round and round? Child on a carousel, head in the clouds. He might talk of the fox caught by his hound; today he saw angels and he’s heaven-bound. What does he hope going up and down? Child on a carousel, head in the clouds. Some days he’s a king with a golden crown; he may play tricks, make believe he’s a clown. ~~Building bridges to what the cloud enshrouds.~~ In the next ten years, he'll have ups and downs. What does he expect of gray clouds? He will see happiness turn into frowns, betrayal by best friends, new homes, new towns. Then in ten more years, he’ll make the rounds. What does he anticipate of white clouds? Wife? College? Career? Right now one thing astounds - he's making memory's bridge on playgrounds.
April 3, 2020 contest: Carousel Picture Prompt Poetry sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/7/2020 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason, with great imagery, rhyme and content. Thank you for entering my contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/11/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thanks, Eve
Date: 4/7/2020 2:56:00 PM
the final stanza makes it quite a thought provoking piece Reason and I love the form you used I've never seen it before:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2020 3:02:00 PM
I welcome your comment, Jan. As a grandma of a H.S. senior my thoughts included dreams which won't happen...no senior prom, no senior trip to D.C., winter-guard competitions cut short. Will they have a graduation? I appreciate your comment and the form is a good one.
Date: 4/7/2020 9:45:00 AM
Reason, this is a beautiful, skillfully-written WINNING poem! Janice
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, Janice, so glad for your commendation and positive comment. I welcome your reply. Be safe. Believe.

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