Memory Loss

an haiku each day will keep dementia at bay now then where was I. Haiku in the Mirror Contest Sponsored by Matt Caliri July 26, 2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 3:02:00 PM

haha. I loved that. Congrats

John Read
Date: 9/1/2023 1:41:00 AM

Thank you Andrea blessings.

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 8:19:00 PM

Funny, clever poem! Excellent job placing 13 out of 71 entries. Lucky 13!

John Read
Date: 8/25/2023 4:35:00 AM

Thank you Matt,I'm well pleased with my placing in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2023 3:01:00 PM

A creative/fun Haiku write. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you would write more. Have a great day writing away............

John Read
Date: 8/10/2023 5:17:00 AM

Hi Paula most of my efforts are on another site,called FamilyFriendsPoems.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/2/2023 1:39:00 PM

Ha! Let's try ten haikus a day. Ready, set...

John Read
Date: 8/3/2023 10:38:00 AM

Go!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/2/2023 11:51:00 AM

Lol love this John thanks for the smile my friend. Witty and clever...

John Read
Date: 8/2/2023 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Michael dear friend for your time and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2023 1:53:00 PM

Ha. Great humor here

John Read
Date: 8/2/2023 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Andrea it seems age is catching up with me. xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/26/2023 9:59:00 AM

Same place as me. I can relate to this Haiku too brother John, you’ve no idea what stupid things I do, I have to laugh at myself or I’d cry… Sis Belle

John Read
Date: 7/26/2023 10:10:00 AM

Hi sister Beryl, I'm not to clever writing Haiku's,this is my attempt for the haiku contest. Its good if you can laugh off those little mistakes,a sense of humor is priceless.xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2023 8:49:00 AM

You were writing ku…to keep dementia at bay…now then where was I ;)

John Read
Date: 7/26/2023 9:32:00 AM

Its happening to you Kim as well.xx

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2023 8:41:00 AM

lol I can relate lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Read
Date: 7/26/2023 9:43:00 AM

Keep those poems coming Jan,they keep those brain marbles working.xx