Memory lane

on a broken night
marinated in lost thought
a pen with papers
tried many sweet rhyming shots
they sketched and screeched of weird creeps

never-named poems,
sang them to tunes, sold to fools.
then comes salty preach~
the damn nerve to rob and thrive
off a barely legal child…

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Date: 12/14/2024 8:14:00 PM
"marinated in lost thought a pen with papers" - A contemplatd birth. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/9/2024 8:08:00 AM
Interesting tanka!
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Date: 12/9/2024 7:47:00 AM
Oh papi!! Haha you are legally green! Never illegal! And yes i had those moments of lyrics writing too and they were sung so beautifully but atleast i got the credit lolol to some and some nope. You were a great lyricist and is a great poet! And I absolutely lovee the wordplay and you are funny as always.”tried many sweet rhyming shots they sketched and screeched of weird creeps” gosh i would like to read those! And you were always one of the few i shared my rustic rhymes with too! Besy wishes
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Date: 12/9/2024 9:40:00 AM
Thank u papiii…. Those were the days I tell u !!! Getting emotional a lil thinking abt how young n dump I was … think um hormonal … XD
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