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Memory Clouds

Muting of mums, yet rainbow’s nigh. Memory clouds don’t often lie. Darkened skies of treetops. One drop. Subdued arcs in photo workshop. Release of the silver lining. The truth of matters reclining. Facts are not new violets in rain. Kissing splotched photo, without brain. Virga won’t release history. Weather remains a mystery. Slight chance of weeping; willows fade. Jellyfish don’t reach hunter’s blade.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/20/2025 2:40:00 PM

As one time follows another, your poem cautions me that one memory releases another. The wonderful flow has a happy ending when a jellyfish escapes its doom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2025 4:24:00 PM

Apparently some clouds look like jellyfish. The hunter’s blade refers to the grass. Hugs

Sara Baker

Date: 6/20/2025 2:28:00 PM

a delightful use of imagery, Kim. I especially liked 'memory clouds don't lie.' yellow rose

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2025 4:25:00 PM

Thank you so much! I had fun writing this and moving the lines around.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/20/2025 11:09:00 AM

Memories become so dreamy- a cross between both? A line, silver lining? A wish itself on a memory. That's what comes to me. I am floating, now, too. LOL <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2025 4:25:00 PM

I’m glad that you can move along with the dream… hugs :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/20/2025 6:32:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Kim. Your poem has a nice flow to it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2025 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Oliver :)