Memory, a Diary-Win

A Festival celebrations vacation was on
And a pleasure to go swimming every morn
With friends to the open Arabian sea.
Noticed a war-ship anchored onto the sea.

Hey, buddy, let’s go up to the ship there
And let’s see who comes first to the shore.
As we were about to approach the ship 
Saw some soldiers pointing guns at us.

Fled like a frightened fish seeking the shore
Forgetting who reached first and who the last.
A word went round the town as of caution
As it was the time of the Second World War.

Nothing happened for the next few days
And the ship had gone one fine morning.
But we learnt the lesson of how to swim 
Against the tide and also with the tide.

I carry about with me this diary as a treasure
As the lasting perfume, not as a past pleasure

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Dr. Ram Mehta
3rd place win in
Contest: Free Verse by P.D.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Congrats on the win, Doc! :)
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Dr. :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:21 AM
the memories tucked in the folds of one's mind seem to come out in the best of poems...congrats on your win with this gem :)
Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 7:39 AM
- Congrats on the win in the contest, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 7:08 AM
loved the walk of memories you took us on congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
Deschler Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 2:49 PM
A very interesting poem. Sometimes, not all of our memories are good ones. Great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the nice comments.
Anglesey Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Powerful experiences and memories are not always so sweet. Great write :) Congrats on your win !
Liwayway Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:35 AM
wow, a very interesting memory ;) congratulations on your awesome win friend Ram ;) cheers!! :)
Richards Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:34 AM
Such a powerful memory this is. Very intense .....congratulations on your win, and thank you for sharing!
Britt Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Great entry. Congratulations on your winning placement. CTB
May Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:32 AM
congrats on your win Ram
Bantawa Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 11:01 PM
congrats Dr. Ram.
A   Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Hello Dr RAm, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 12:58 AM
this sounds like a fun time from your youth. You have much to write from your life experiences, Dr. Ram. I hope you stay here at Soup. Luv, Andrea
Guy Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:14 PM
Dr. Ram, I enjoyed the read, and am happy to hear that the soldiers spared you & buddy to live on and write for us. ;-)
Parker Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Purloined treasure written on the heart! A nice, didactic object lesson. Until we have learned to swim against the tide, we cannot fully appreciate the blessings that we have accumulated. Enjoyed your trip down memory lane.
Parker Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Purloined treasure written on the heart! A nice, didactic object lesson. Until we have learned to swim against the tide, we cannot fully appreciate the blessings that we have accumulated. Enjoyed your trip down memory lane.
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:08 AM
I have enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning Dr. Ram. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. I did try to write for your contest and hope it is what you were asking for. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Adventure is the spice of life i am told, Dr Ram.! Glad you didn't get peppered and and are telling young tales from your day's of old..
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Very creative work..Especially like the way that you presented the last two lines..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 5:02 PM
a super caper Dr. Ram... a lesson learned .. a brave and bold adventure..luv..
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July 7, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Enjoyed reading today....I have seen movies on pearl harbor and can't really imagine how life can change over night in a split second.
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