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fragile skin stretches across the cheeks of death's dawn beauty-marked weeping I see only the groom now peach sweet the memories rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/18/2015 9:59:00 PM
one day, I will be as good as you... Linda
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Debbie, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful write a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:38:00 AM
Oh so sad Debbie this is a beautiful tanka:-) congrats. Hugs Jan
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Date: 10/6/2012 9:33:00 PM
Wow, this is a stunner! Steller work Debbie.
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Date: 10/6/2012 2:37:00 PM
Great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
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