Memories Without a Face

Standing on the shoreline
Watching life flow by
Can’t remember how to swim
Too afraid to try.

The footprints are silent
Leaving no trace
Where memories of the past
No longer have a face.

It moves in deliberately
Like a cloudy day
Covering the mind
And blowing it astray.

Little by little
It devours away
Erasing the knowledge
That once guided the way.

Wandering like a lost child
In a brutal desert storm
Feeling the grains of sand
Sting like a sharp thorn.

Standing on the shoreline
Watching the past flow by
Unable to remember
Or understand why.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 1, 2009 at 3:55 AM
Unprecedented piece that gave me chills as I read on.You are a gifted writer that can move the reading audience.I am amazed!!! Sincerely,Eric
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October 26, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week Deborah, its great to see your name up in lights >> James,xx
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October 26, 2009 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deborah. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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October 25, 2009 at 6:46 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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August 3, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Delightful read Deborah, another joy capturing me>>James
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