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Memories Without a Face

Standing on the shoreline Watching life flow by Can’t remember how to swim Too afraid to try. The footprints are silent Leaving no trace Where memories of the past No longer have a face. It moves in deliberately Like a cloudy day Covering the mind And blowing it astray. Little by little It devours away Erasing the knowledge That once guided the way. Wandering like a lost child In a brutal desert storm Feeling the grains of sand Sting like a sharp thorn. Standing on the shoreline Watching the past flow by Unable to remember Or understand why.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/1/2009 3:55:00 AM
Unprecedented piece that gave me chills as I read on.You are a gifted writer that can move the reading audience.I am amazed!!! Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:08:00 AM
Many, many congratulations on your poetry being featured on this October week Deborah, its great to see your name up in lights >> James,xx
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deborah. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2009 6:46:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/3/2009 11:07:00 AM
Delightful read Deborah, another joy capturing me>>James
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