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Memories We Cherish

Life is a garland of many lovely flowers, each flower is a memory that we cherish, the needle and thread of time pass through the lot, binding them together so you never forgot! joyous fragrance from school days come fleeting in row, memories of laughter with friends we used to know, taskmaster principal who ensured discipline, the teachers,the play room, and long lunchtime bee line! of teenage years, romance, and those lovely long nights, when dreams are golden, hopes and wishes of great heights, dawn of reality, out to build a career, success of finding job that brought family cheer! marriage and children then make bulk of the flowers, fragrance from the garland smells sweetest when lovers, love of parents is eternal perfume in heart, gratitude we owe them for their love from the start! the garland grows and gathers flowers on the way, as we age and take on new roles each year, each day, colourful, cheerful embellished with many thoughts, the memories we cherish are fragrance of hearts! 1st placement Written 03/0April/2021 A day before my 62nd birthday Constance La France sponsored Cherish prompt poetry contest. 12 syllables each line

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Date: 4/12/2021 8:19:00 AM
These are such beautiful memories to cherish... Krishji... Loved this... You have rhymed it well... I specially loved 'the needle and thread of time pass through a lot... binding them together so you never forgot... '.... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/12/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Ani! Very kind of you! Appreciate your supportive words! Pleased you like it!!:)
Date: 4/9/2021 8:09:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Cherish and creating this beautiful poem, so wonderfully penned, well done _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/9/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Constance! Inspiring theme and enjoyed writing this! great poems all! I enjoyed reading them!
Date: 4/9/2021 1:39:00 AM
A Garland of thoughts to cherish...Congrats on your lovely poem Krish...do take care :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/9/2021 1:58:00 AM
Thanks Carol!Pleased with tour visit and kind comments! Thanks indeed.:)
Date: 4/8/2021 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Krish, for the awesome win with an awesome poem. The Garland, the flowers, the thread and needle - everything comes together cherishing the memories in our hearts. BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/8/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Mala! Thank you for kind words! I am pleased it was placed well in the contest! :) Kind regards! Krish
Date: 4/4/2021 7:55:00 PM
Love the way you've extended the flower metaphor throughout your write, Krish. Nicely penned! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/4/2021 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Good to have you back. Hope you had a good vacation.
Date: 4/3/2021 7:36:00 PM
Exquisite work, Krish. I loved the fact that your flowers made lovely metaphors. Your rhyming is first-rate, and it is one of the most delightful poems of yours I have read. Best wishes. Happy Easter, too!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/3/2021 10:07:00 PM
Milton thank you! and honoured to receive such lovely supportive words from you! God bless you my friend!
Date: 4/3/2021 1:43:00 PM
WoW! Krish, What a wonderful piece on the things we hold dear and cherish. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great today and tomorrow on your birthday:-) Alexis
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/3/2021 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Alexis! Yes, memories build up as we get older. and they get sweeter! God bless and thanks for the bday wishes!

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