Memories Tableau

Ivory keys are old and damaged now, years of memories locked within their depth, fingers now gnarled once drew melodic sounds
Penned Oct 31 2017 using visual 1 Verified by how many syllables.com. ...Totals: 5.5.5.5.5.5.syllables
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Allison Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Seren, glad we are now on the same timezone lol:-) hugs jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:47 PM
pensive poem well done, serene.. congrats on your win and thanks for participating.
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Beautiful, Seren, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:58 PM
This is really nice, Seren. I love how you painted the scene. Congrats for your win.
Michaels Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Lovely write, Seren. "Gnarled" is such an evocative word! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
Smith Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Excellent poem Seren...I like the form
Vaso Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Very beautiful and creative Seren.
Roberts Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 9:16 PM
thank you my friend....Seren
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Your imagery is very beautifully expressed Seren. Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 4:21 AM
I'm glad you didn't post a picture for this poem your vivid imagery is superb and I can picture it so clearly in my minds eye. I think we are on different time zones to Wales, we turned the clock back and hour - you've leapt forward one day lol lol:-) Happy Halloweeeeen xxx hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 5:43 AM
Haha I realised and came back to alter it. Glad you liked it. Yes I thought pic would take the visual part in my words away.....thanks...Seren
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