Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

- Memories On Branches -

I am sure you can hear me weep 
Autumn - I will let you sleep 
As you look death in the eye - through heavenly eyed 
I am with you always - sound of leaves falling silently - unimaginably tired 

Naked, forsaken cold and bleak 
Winter allows the soil and the plants sleep 
During the winter snow and dark gray cloud 
The rivers have been frozen - King Winter is proud 

I hear the birds playing my song 
Spring - throw winter clothes - it was not wrong 
Apple blossoms sprouts and clear blue sky 
This makes me so happy - wish I could fly 

Lightweight shoes and golden hair 
A smile on your face - so easy to care 
Summer is here - feet in the hot sand 
Flowers and butterflies ... oh ... I love my land






26.02.2014
A-L Andresen :)

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Sarah Sublett August 3, 2014 at 12:52 PM This is lovely. Makes me long for each season. Nice write. Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 12:55 PM - Spring and summer are my favorites, Sarah - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter July 26, 2014 at 7:02 AM Rich, thought-provoking imagery makes this poem memorable. Yes, I like it. Bravo! Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2014 at 8:02 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paul. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Nehls June 17, 2014 at 12:14 PM Oh, summer. what a beautiful time of year. Creates a great playground. I know how you feel Anne Lise. Liked it a lot.... Robert. Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2014 at 3:38 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Robert - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler March 10, 2014 at 6:23 PM I really liked how you began your poem with autumn and ended it with summer. Great rhyme and beautiful imagery! A wonderful poem, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2014 at 3:53 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kelly - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2014 at 12:58 PM The seasons are wonderfully expressed in your rhyme. It reads like a winner - Connie Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2014 at 1:24 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Connie - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole March 4, 2014 at 1:35 PM This beautiful and lovely, Anne! Wish you luck in the contest! Many thanks to you on your congratulatory comments on my contested works in the G.V's series. Thank you once more! Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2014 at 1:42 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Abdulhafeez - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones March 3, 2014 at 10:06 PM This is very lovely...does bring a smile to my face...so sweet Anne Lise..good luck in this contest Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2014 at 3:46 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Donna - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless March 1, 2014 at 10:41 AM This is beautiful and I enjoyed it greatly. I cant wait for Spring to arrive <3 Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 10:59 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jay - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jayne Eggins March 1, 2014 at 7:53 AM You guy are anxious for spring and we cant wait for Autumn... its been a hot summer, lovely poem good luck in the competition :) take care love Jayne x Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 8:05 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jayne - Have a great day .... Autumn is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 1, 2014 at 2:33 AM may the branches of spring lighten your day, anne.. it;s saturday; time to dance away!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 5:22 AM - It's a beautiful Saturday :) - the sun shines!! - - - // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau February 28, 2014 at 8:49 PM Hello Anne Lise ! Wonderful write here dear poet ! I have one thing I need to say.....were is my spring ? It is still freezing here in Pa., and there are two more winter blasts to come here ! Yikes ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend my friend.....much love, james Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 5:20 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, James - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton February 28, 2014 at 4:11 PM nearly here now Anne Lise twenty days to go a lovely poem symbolizing the seasons hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2014 at 5:19 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller February 28, 2014 at 1:45 PM that's a beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyming,I enjoyed reading it , God bless you, Hugs!Erich Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 2:43 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Erich - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama February 28, 2014 at 10:48 AM Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 11:16 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Funom - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin February 28, 2014 at 10:33 AM Season's sensations captured by one inspirational pen in the hand of Anne-Lise. My best 7 chuck Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 11:15 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda February 28, 2014 at 8:16 AM Awesome as always Anne Lise-- you are such an inspirational to us all Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 11:15 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kim - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun February 28, 2014 at 8:07 AM This is such a very lovely write my dear friend Anne Lise. A very wonderful image and feelings were expressed here. Embracing this poem & the poet as I was enjoying it thoroughly tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you a great wkend ahead! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 11:15 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Leonora - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath February 28, 2014 at 8:01 AM Excellent beauty of land's memories. A very nicely adorned the memories of past. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 11:14 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, bl. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak February 28, 2014 at 7:20 AM More lovely, soothing images flowing from your pen. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 7:29 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri February 28, 2014 at 7:10 AM Wow this is one of yor best poems i feel. Gorgeous in imagery, memories and rhyme scheme. Lovely to read u again. Tc. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 7:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments,S.K. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll February 27, 2014 at 7:37 PM Nicely penned Anne, I like this one. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 2:56 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ken - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne February 27, 2014 at 2:35 PM what a beautiful write : ) Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 2:55 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jack - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud February 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM you fill each season with different flavors so delightful, anne... norway rules and so does this stunning write... happy springtime with huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2014 at 11:30 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nette - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shaista Aziz February 27, 2014 at 6:49 AM a nice poem anne lise ! flowers and butterflies ...oh I love my land. loved this line!!!!!!!!!!! Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2014 at 6:51 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shaista - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian February 27, 2014 at 5:21 AM :) I can envision you with the sun in your hair, Anne Lise. My favorite line? Spring- throw winter clothes...Yes. There is nothing as magical as the arrival of spring. You captured that beauty. Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2014 at 6:36 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Eileen - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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