Memories of Love

Of memories of love I’ve had a few
I’ve stored inside the niches of my mind -
to call them up whenever I’m inclined.
The one that shines for me with brightest hue
was once upon a time, with one I knew,
who kissed me gently as we intertwined.
But often, simple acts that were quite kind
escape my recall; they are no less true. . .

For instance, there’s my mother’s love for me
and how she always puts my needs above
her own;  my friends’ and family’s easy grace;
my husband’s steadfast ways; my dear dog’s glee
on seeing me; thus, memories of love
most precious are the ones most common-place.


For Brian Strand's 
FOUR TO FOURTEEN any form/any theme 4 to max 14 lines Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Andrea Such a wonderful and caring write. It made me feel loved and all warm and cozy. You did a great job expressing love in different ways with different people. Nice job Hugs Thanks for the kind and silly comment on my Christmas And Children poem
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June 2, 2012 at 7:14 PM
oo I feel, a fun rhythm here.. you are teasing with every kind of love here. i fell a little laugh here, when you are adding the glee of a dog. it is funny, when a dog's love can be felt.. but you know what A mothers unconditional love is the best.. I think, even way better than my Nathan's. I love the way I keep all kinds of love in my mind. Like the sun, each individuality love has it's own tone. My kids think I love my granddaughter more than them..lol.. every-time i get home or she goes to my restaurant my eyes light up like your dear dog..lol.. i even feel like wagging my tail ((if i had one)) when Royal drops her off at my job.. he he he.. she brings out the Niagara-falls out on me..I'm running all kinds of love that moment..non-stop.. xox..pd
A   Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 7:05 PM
wow! Andrea, you have like 20 poem pages.. are you crazy.. he he he! it took me a while to figure out how to look for this poem,, with such a far away date... i thought poems, expired on the soup..pd
Page Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Makes you stop and think Love Rog xx
Lemons Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 10:38 PM
I think you should place it under love :) this is such a nice poem! keep it up, thanks for sharing.
Masters Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Love collections...well done.
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:16 PM
Outstanding summation in these words - congrats on your placement in the contest, Yf4L - God Bless, mj
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:15 PM
Outstanding summation in these words - congrats on your placement in the contest, Yf4L - God Bless, mj
K. Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Hi again Andrea :) & congrats on your win with this inspiring sonnet of yours --it sure evoked much happier feelings in me :) & yup, I think I ran out of luck with that tanka of mine...was surprised-- you didn't win either? well I hope you have a great night!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in Constance's contest.. with your wonderful write.. another perfect win so well deserved ..and many more to come.. just got back from my eye surgery ..one more next week... then maybe I will be able to focus and see clear again..haha..that should be fun..haha..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Freeman Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 10:30 AM
It seema the Italian Sonnet form worked well for you in this one, Andrea Agape, Moses
Iyer Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 9:44 AM
A beautiful poetry on love. Thanks for your comments on my poem too. I do not consider myself a poet, so categorize my poems as light poetry. I would like you to suggest me a better categorization, as you seem to know about poems a lot better than me. Meanwhile, I will continue enjoying your poems cheers suresh
Chachere Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:20 PM
love is a precious place to look back when you had this love, but a mother's love will never go away.when your husband is unworthy of it these days. -Always&Forever LYnette
Hilliker Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Great poem, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. I really like this poem. :-)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 11:08 PM
Yes three parades all day up and down the boardwalk and craft shows and s memorial ceremony early tomorrow ..am luving it so much ..hate to leave and my birthday bash at a local nightclub tomorrow night too.. what more could a girl ask for ... oh yeah... peace /piece with Ron would be nice..hahah..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 11:06 PM
OK no rating ..just a comment ..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:55 PM
OK Andrea ...look at this poem and see what its numbers say... then I will come back and rate it .. we are almost at the restaurant for hot tea to warm up... luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 10:55 PM
OK now I will rate it a 7 .. check your number rating it now ...luv..
Tideswell Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Excellent! You blew me away with the beauty of your reflective sonnet. I've yet to try writing an Italian sonnet, love the soft, easy flow of this one :)
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May 28, 2010 at 7:20 PM
This is a really nice poem. It means to me, "how many people do I love and in how many ways." I enjoyed it. As for Gen Y – there’s tons of legal positions a licensed attorney can have. For instance, some jobs are: clerk of courts, jury management, and director of domestic abuse, attorney for a local bank or credit union, school district, elected official. Many news reporters are licensed to practice law. Also, engineers doctors or lawyers always find jobs. Private practice is good too.
Guzzi Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 4:19 PM
sigh.....love?!...just another boring working in the yard weekend...sigh
Austin Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:10 PM
I'm reading "Polishing Stones" in your "Dreaming the Unicorn." Like your choice of stones. The agate is the most beautiful of all polished stones so far as I am concerned. your poetry IS like the agate - beautifully polished. Love, Dave
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May 28, 2010 at 3:11 AM
The evidence of love is all around if we take time to look. And all the more precious to remember. good one Andrea....Margaret
A   Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 1:03 AM
well done Andrea, good luck in her contest. I am just here to check if you blocked out poor little o' meeee. It really s*cks some poets have their heads up there ass. Blocked me out for no reason. Hope you are not one. I will see if my comment does not bounce of your comment box. have a lovely Friday,..p.d.
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May 27, 2010 at 11:13 PM
Per your comment, I think this approach is far more interesting -- at least for me. But everyone has their own opinion. Hope Constance appreciates your creative interpretation of the assigned theme. Love, Carolyn
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