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Blinded by tears that refuse to flow Cornered by fears that refuse to go I stand alone, The emptiness inside is not a sign of calm rather forbades the approaching storm, The pain of loneliness is no longer a respite the cup is full now… needs to tide I need a shoulder to cry on, To wail, to weep, to sob, to sigh to breach the wall that stands so high. 1st May 2013

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Date: 2/1/2014 11:00:00 PM
I really like this one. It speaks of that pain that we just sometimes feel so strongly. GREAT last two lines.
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Date: 1/3/2014 6:59:00 PM
painful and lovely....hope you found that shoulder...standing alone is one of the most difficult challenges in life...on this site you will find friends, I'm certain. (and I would be honored...)..Victoria
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:25:00 PM
Congrats!! That was beautiful. Sometimes you have to let your emotions out. Tears are not weakness. It shows strength to admit that you hurt. Very nice.
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:38:00 AM
Beautiful Afroze. Many congrats dear.When are you coming to Nagpur?
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Date: 5/10/2013 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Tahera, Reaching MB on 17th. kids are already there. see you soon.
Date: 5/9/2013 11:31:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/9/2013 5:03:00 PM
Sometimes that's the healthiest way to go. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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