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Memories Are Immortal

We are all equal, though they say you lad who do they think they are they're not my dad, on battle fields we live or die the same fight for king and country that's why we came being just fifteen makes no difference able to shoot and fight only makes sense, hungry, cold, lousy, I write a letter to my mother, try not to upset her, I do not record horror of warfare or how my superiors do not care, fix bayonets, our Sergeant yelled out loud heard a whistle blow so followed the crowd, those big tough men dropped down lifeless, like flies sounds so loud though can not drown out their cries, then shell carrying my number 7 sending me from this hell straight to heaven, to the memorial now mother goes to read my name, so much sorrow she shows, she now knows the truth warfare is awful Don't forget memories are immortal. 24/02/2017.

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Date: 3/29/2017 4:16:00 PM
Your take on this theme is quite original, Roy. You show war for what it really is! Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/30/2017 3:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul, my inspiration at attempting to write poetry is Wilfred Owen so have an interest in WW1, thanks again for your support, Roy, :))
Date: 3/20/2017 3:22:00 PM
Roy congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/20/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for the opportunity and placement, excellent contest thoroughly enjoyed, Roy. :))
Date: 2/25/2017 4:39:00 PM
Poignant write, Roy! Nicely done.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/25/2017 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment, I really appreciate your support and encouragement, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 2/24/2017 10:59:00 AM
Very sad Roy. Great job:) Good luck!
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/24/2017 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel, actually felt sad when writing this, so pleased for you support and encouragement.
Date: 2/24/2017 6:58:00 AM
Excellent Roy. Well written :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi your very kind, I think it fits the criteria of iambic pentameter, thanks again, Roy.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/24/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi your very kind, I think it fits the criteria of iambic pentameter, thanks again, Roy.
Date: 2/24/2017 6:08:00 AM
Well written in first person view, Roy:) P.s. 2nd line- shouldn't it be 'they're' instead of 'their':)
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Date: 2/24/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo for your kind comment and alerting me to that spelling error much appreciated, thanks again, Roy.

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