Memories

Memories of past
hold fast in my heavy heart.
     Weight of losing you.


09/06/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 2:38 PM
The pain and ache of losing a loved one is well projected in these words, Jean. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Murray Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Hello Paul. Lovely to see you. Thank you for your visit.
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 12:03 PM
- Jean, congratulations on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you. I love your entry as well Sunshine.
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations Jean ! :)
Murray Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Heidi. Same to you.
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful but sad jean i would classify this as a senryu rather than a haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Done Jan. Thank you. I am learning something new every day. It's great!
Gazbowski Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 9:07 AM
wonderfully crafted Jean, hauntingly sad words.
Murray Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 9:17 AM
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June 9, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Thank you Lenny.
Heemstra Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 6:27 AM
A heavy heart and memories that never leave. A very nice haiku!
Murray Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Robert. I rarely do these.
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