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Memories

A barren desert Underneath the scorching sun Like the memories Those of my dear cherished one Emptied as the time spins it’s hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/20/2018 5:08:00 PM
This is a very nicely written tanka. Much thought put into it.
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Date: 5/8/2015 7:36:00 AM
- A truly beautiful poem, Jonathan! (a 7) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jonathan Medida
Date: 8/18/2018 4:29:00 AM
thank you for reading

Book: Shattered Sighs