Memories

A barren desert
Underneath the scorching sun
Like the memories
Those of my dear cherished one
Emptied as the time spins it’s hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 5:08 PM
This is a very nicely written tanka. Much thought put into it.
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 7:36 AM
- A truly beautiful poem, Jonathan! (a 7) - I wish you a wonderful weekend, with many smiles and sunshine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Medida Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:29 AM
thank you for reading
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