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When the world stops and the tears drop and my heart beats for every word it used to hear.. When the sky rains and the stars fade Awakening every soul pain that came my way, taking me away eversince that day when you and I turned our faces.. When th waves crash on the Golden Sand hitting our feet, where we used to stand on our so called "Love Land".. When the flowers grow between me and You it was so true that our love is pure.. It grew up, starting with a bud and it showed up, growing till forever till it stopped.. At then I knew, we've came through what we could and no longer would.. Love has gone to the world of none.. and it's all about MEMORIES.. Of starting blocks that we put on top building our home with such unforgettable events.. At the moment the wave hit the sand, crashing our home land It was you & me with our forgotten love words, having our endless fights Just life our crashed life.. NOw waving Goodbye with no further try.. I had enough, and I guess you know why!! now it will be on the Shelf and that is when they call it.. The END.. But there is no.. Happily Ever After..

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Date: 5/26/2012 4:45:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Very expressive and emotive work..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mia. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Mia. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 3:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:31:00 PM
Mia, ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:18:00 PM
Mia congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Mia. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:02:00 AM
i like how you did sandcastles metaphorically! If it was for the contest, good luck!
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Date: 5/6/2012 9:37:00 AM
Touching written poem Mia,we have to fight for marriage and true love.Wish you all the best. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/6/2012 7:18:00 AM
Very emotional..Marriage is nothing but work..hard work..Of course I'm no expert..Enjoyed your poetry.
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