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Swirling leaves, yellow brown and crinkled, whirling round up and round, heaven bound, up and away, sensing the spirits of by gone friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
cool imagery in this tanka. I'm learning all the time thanks to folks like you, Doris. enjoyed. Robert
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:29:00 AM
Yow ... this is awesome imagery, it makes any poem fly.
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Date: 12/11/2009 5:07:00 AM
Nicely done fall/winter write. Just a hint of something else. Keep the magical pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:02:00 AM
Woderful poems today Doris, keep em comin'.....:JP]
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Date: 12/10/2009 6:06:00 AM
Nice Tanka Doris... I enjoyed the read...Taz
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