Memories

How you got in so deep I may never know,
If you ever really liked me you wouldn't let it show.
I thought that you here with me was destiny,
Would never have guessed my love for you would make you flee.
When I was with you I didn't feel alone,
But as it turns our your heart was hard as stone.

There you are, off with someone new,
While I'm here drowning myself in memories of you.
I should have known better than to let you in,
But if I hadn't were would we have been?
My feelings for you was deep and true,
Thats what sent you into the arms of someone new.

I should have know to stay gaurded,
But why did you have to be so cold hearted?
You said you never wanted it to end cause I was perfect in ever way,
Who were you really saying that to every single day?
If you really didn't want me, why did you pretend,
Instead of dragging out, why it had to end?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/22/2009 7:42:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/19/2009 3:06:00 PM
Unfortunately this is something that happens in a lot of relationships. Feelings that come out of nowhere that just knocks you off kilter. Either way, I really like this poem and it definitely deserved to be featured.
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:04:00 AM
Christyn, Sadly, many young women fall in love with their own dreams and the words of passionate boys only to see them run, run, RUN! from their feelings or lies, whichever it is. Congratulations on having your emotional poem featured this week. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Christyn. Love Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 5:49:00 AM
Good Morning Christyn. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 3:09:00 PM
Never would I have guessed my love would make you flee....That's........You said you never wanted our love to end because I was perfect in every way......Hope this helps. There is no answer hon, they're men. Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:09:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:58:00 AM
Great write Christyn>>James
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