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Memorable Night

I remember that cold frosty night Chilled we lay to the bone I sought your warmth Holding you tight Truer bliss I have never known Like petals of a single bloom Two blooms on a single stem Entwined we lay Reality obscured I found heaven in your hem

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/7/2024 9:37:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 1:10:00 AM

BILAL ZAFER, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:48:00 PM

BILAL, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **