Memento On The Moon


Nothing lies between charming Eve and her,  
portrayed in the radiant face of rainbow hue,
shimmering with an enigmatic smile. 
The charisma of the spectacular still life,
created layer on layer by maestro Vinci,
activates the sense of awe in the luring visage, 
with the eyes of crystal stars dreaming cosmic dreams. 
The tinsels of charm swathe the mesmerized hearts,
pulsating with beguiling celestial cadence. 
The aura of exquisite brilliance spreads the veil of mystery
on the grand masterpiece of superb living art.
The metaphors of her relentless appeal 
define women’s enduring eternal magnificence,
worthy of memento in lunar luminescence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Richards Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 3:55 AM
It was a refreshing take on the contest brief where you chose to honour women as a whole in ‘The charisma of the spectacular still life, / created layer on layer by maestro Vinci’. Thank you for your support, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much for the placement and for your encouraging comments.
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 11:40 PM
Looks good. Gosh, I read the context rules but don't think I. Capable to try this contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 8:13 AM
Thank you.
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