Memento On The Moon

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Written, April 9, 2025
For The Premiere Contest, “Memento On The Moon”
Sponsor, Suzette Richards

We left our Nation's sign up on the Moon, with footprints clear, and flag still standing tall. A stepping stone to future times in space? Or wars to claim the Moon- never to share? Our footprints live- these years have not erased the glory of that day we etched its sand. Some have placed flags- but not by human hands, and woe the day they fight to seize the Moon; to change it from the Earth's celestial scene- to victory, they'd seize through cosmic wars. Now, this framed poem I would send up there as my heartfelt memento on the Moon- pray that my words inspire countries to share its vantage point to leap from and explore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/23/2025 3:02:00 AM
This poem skilfully outlines our obsession with the moon: a landmark expedition or the subject of a future war? Leaving this poem on the moon as a cautionary tale is an inspired Notional Ekphrasis as poetry is mankind’s voice throughout the ages – even your choice of Blank Verse (the default poetic form for many centuries) lends an elegant nuance to your poem. Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Sandra.
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