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Melts To Taste

rainbow colors chilled.. warm fingers touch the cool sides.. my tongue melts to taste.. by Michael J Falotico for P.D "Neapolitan Ice Cream" Haiku contest 10/1/11

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/9/2011 3:23:00 AM

Yes well put obsevations Michael and i see you have had a (win, well deserved...

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/7/2011 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations, dear Michael... :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2011 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 12:48:00 AM

Congrats Michael on a top ten win with this yummy sweet treat in words... well Yankees blew it leaving those bases loaded and men on base.. I still luv them ..but.. what a mess and at home too.. comfort vibes to u .. luv.. xoxo..

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/6/2011 10:43:00 PM

oooh, very well done. Feels like a very sensual poem and its about ice cream... go figure. Well done. Lee

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/6/2011 8:28:00 PM

A multi-sensory haiku here. Congratulations on your win!!! Well-deserved!!!

Cory Long

Date: 10/6/2011 3:33:00 PM

congrats my dear friend with this winning gem. free spirit

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 1:37:00 PM

I remember this well and am so happy to see it in the winners' circle, Michael. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2011 11:54:00 AM

DEAR MICHAEL.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2011 3:49:00 PM

even eating ice cream sounds romantic with these words Michael luv.. sweetly penned.. good luck in the contest... J.G. in yummy mode..now ..xoxo..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2011 2:54:00 PM

Very expressive and creative work for the contest...Winners' circle for sure..I enjoy that Neapolitan Ice Cream because it is so varied..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work written out on the porch..Sara

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/2/2011 11:14:00 AM

You make me crave for neapolitan, right now, Michael.. goodluck in the contest. :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/1/2011 8:21:00 PM

Takes skill to give such great pictures in so few words, all the best in the contest!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/1/2011 8:19:00 PM

A lot of action going on in the haiku! Love how your warm fingers caused the....tongue melts to taste. Great ...p..a..u..s..e.......I f I am not mistaken, you don't capitalize anything..? I always seek aid from Miss Debbie on anything regarding Haiku....or Charles. :) Could we rename your haiku?...".Hey, Let's Get Mikey!!" ha ha. Remember the Life cereal commercial. Best to you. .....my paper clip collection is calling....Gwendolen

Cory Long

Date: 10/1/2011 4:10:00 PM

good luck in the contest with this gem my friend thank you for all your support these past few days.. cory

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/1/2011 2:16:00 PM

Love your take on the Haiku, Michael. Rich and tasty imagery on this wet day. Hope you've been doing well. Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/1/2011 1:34:00 PM

What a beautiful entry for PD's contest, Michael. Neapolitan does look like "rainbow colors chilled." Best wishes for a big win! Love, Carolyn