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Melting Shadow At Sunset

Trudging through the torrent of crowd, the entities inherently disconnected, a wasted lonely walk not taken before. When time dilates encompassing the present, reaches the edge of fading perception, frail past crumbles as waves on distant shore. As moonless sky falls with the ebon night shards of broken heart disperse in stillness on the wasteland of stark desolation. Future horizon doesn’t see the sun rise, dislodged dreams drown in perpetual dark, still life finds the anchor in island of isolation. When forlorn distance stretches far, reaches the fringe of the empty vision, creeping seclusion permeates porous life. The endless walk to nowhere of no purpose takes the soul to the depth of despair through the tormenting times of strife. When distraught insight loses the track, wanders disoriented in the wilderness, imposed insulation it’ll indubitably get. Dismayed mind disintegrates to spread on the waning time’s darkened shadow, melting in the gloom of bleeding sunset.
Written : July 26, 2019 May 23, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice R Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 8/13/2019 7:32:00 PM
I love the language and sad beauty of your poetic gem, Subimal. I’m always enraptured by your imagery, no matter the mood of the piece. Your last theee lines make for a stunning finale. Exquisite artistry! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. Susan
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:28:00 PM
Wonderful write Subimal, congrats on a win this time around!
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