Joesephine Remarnier Poet Kyrielle

Melting Pot : America Freedom

Flames and fire are Devil’s friend,
melting, melting till the end,
conglomerate conformity
Oh God have you abandoned thee?

My freedom hand hits iron wall,
I’m simmered in a hamster ball,
running, running on worn out knee
Oh God have you abandoned thee?

My waxy self runs from the heat,
alas, alas I have no feet,
they’ve melted patriotically,
Oh God have you abandoned thee?

My colours blend unto a grey
My past has just been wiped away
Star spangled mediocrity
Oh God have you abandoned thee?

I gaze up high to see the rim
pray, save us from this burning sin,
free individuality,
Oh God please don’t abandon thee!

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Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2011 at 5:55 PM Nice take on the theme of the contest, Joesephine

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2011 at 12:04 PM We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Joesephine. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol