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Melting Moments. . As the retiring day adorns it’s shroud And the later hours slow gradually down I lay here in alone in darkened room A scented glowing candle shed’s ambient light Inducing a calm subdued mood As the perfume candle wafts as a breeze In this peaceful melting interlude . Soft music caresses my soul Stirring subtle emotions Liberating my spirit from burden As I close my eyes and drift away On soothing calm warm waters My being safely harboured In a far off distant bay . Nothing I want or do need Just calm and serenity lapping over me And the depths of breath I breathe Utter contentment drowning in bliss My naked body kissed By a thousand Invisible lips And gentle feathered strokes Of teasing light fingertips. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 12/30/2020 9:43:00 AM
melting moments yeah i've had a few of them lol..i saw what you did with the last line, i like wordplay and double meaning like that, very good :) x
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/30/2020 3:12:00 PM
Hi Charlotte. thank you glad you enjoyed.So kind. Keep safe. Pete. x
Date: 12/29/2020 11:31:00 PM
Seems you suffer from insomnia. ~~
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/30/2020 4:17:00 AM
Haha.You guessed right my friend. Thanks. Pete.

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