Melting Me

Melting through glass like sand through the sea Burning like fire through the evergreens When you touch me Fingers trembling in the extremity Sprouting to life, a little blossom on a branch Falling through rocks like an avalanche When you hold me My heart flits and flutters incessantly Floating along a river with a cool summer breeze Drifting to the heavens under skies like these When you love me The heavens and stars are drowned in ecstasy
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Harper Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win in the contest, Juli- Michelle. I loved the steady rise of experience in each stanza and how it contributed to our understanding of emotion. Bravo
Proxenos Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Love is a floating, melting, trembling experience - you have written a profound poem which has highlighted the essence of this breathless em otion. Well penned Juli, Hugs, Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 11:52 PM
The lovely imagery in your lines expresses how happy one feels in love. Congratulations on your win Juli-Michelle. : )
Chiri Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Such a lovely expression of love feelings! Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:23 PM
I am almost finished finally catching up here. I saw maybe 30 poems. I think here at the end is my favorite of all. FAVE
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Love the images...beautiful!
Messina Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 5:27 AM
This is a beautiful poem of love, Juli. Very nice to read. Also, I am stopping by to thank you very much for my placement in your contest. So much appreciated. All my best to you...poetry hugs...Charlie
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