Melting Light

I eye you
behind the nudes of the dying light! 

The dark water is sucking the muted sky, 
you breathe inside! 

Canopy above 
lost in sight! 

I feel more azures
And the final notes you left unhooked...


Six a.m, 
I could better mind, 
the silence of the rustling silk; 
on the spots of yellow lights lying in the bed


growing fade ……………
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:57 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Roy Choudhury Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:54 AM
Hi Nilima, Wonderfully expressed, light to fade, drawing a deep allegory to life
Deb Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 12:47 PM
thank you so much dear poet. Regards n love.
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