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Melting Light

I eye you behind the nudes of the dying light! The dark water is sucking the muted sky, you breathe inside! Canopy above lost in sight! I feel more azures And the final notes you left unhooked... Six a.m, I could better mind, the silence of the rustling silk; on the spots of yellow lights lying in the bed growing fade ……………

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Date: 11/25/2017 1:54:00 AM
Hi Nilima, Wonderfully expressed, light to fade, drawing a deep allegory to life
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Nilima Deb
Date: 11/27/2017 12:47:00 PM
thank you so much dear poet. Regards n love.

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