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Melting Ice

ice - started melting love drips from mountain afar my love's first poem 02.02.16

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2016 8:57:00 AM

your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/6/2016 11:04:00 AM

Thank you dear friend Funom. Your words came straight from your heart and I am humbled. If anyone in this universe relates his/her feelings with my simple words, I feel ecstatic. Warm regards, Bobby

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2016 8:52:00 PM

oh this is really sweet and I love the symbolism of the melting ice.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/3/2016 9:55:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I have written this poetry to celebrate the first haiku written by my wife. My net connection was not working and she handed over her phone to check the status of my poems on FB. I did a naughty thing... in our Haiku group we were writing chain verse starting with the last line of last post and written a haiku from her ID and just after that my friends started liking and writing haikus on that verse. When I showed her what happened , she told me this is not my verse. So, I told her the basics of writing Haiku and write down another on that chain verse and she did. It gave me immense pleasure.Much love, Bobby