Frederic Parker Poet Free verse

Melted Candles

I remember each curve
nodding in quiet response
moving towards me, as you walked across the floor
each finger lifting gently to caress the welcomed silence


contest Liberum Divisa
from a poem written 9/21/16
titled Into a Warm Night

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Eric Ashford July 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM Nicely done. It lets the reader see, and does not shove any concrete images at the reader. Subtle and good.

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2019 at 5:42 PM So beautiful, Frederic. Congrats on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2019 at 6:55 PM Beautiful Frederic. Congratulations on your top placement! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 24, 2019 at 2:23 PM Oh, lovely, alluring lines. Wonderful piece Frederick! Congratulations for your win! xomo

Eve Roper May 24, 2019 at 2:11 PM Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Nette Onclaud May 4, 2019 at 7:15 PM ohh, a beguiling write that swept me right into the lines, frederoc... huggs Nette Onclaud May 4, 2019 at 7:16 PM frederic