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Melted Candles

I remember each curve nodding in quiet response moving towards me, as you walked across the floor each finger lifting gently to caress the welcomed silence contest Liberum Divisa from a poem written 9/21/16 titled Into a Warm Night

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Date: 7/4/2019 8:59:00 AM
Nicely done. It lets the reader see, and does not shove any concrete images at the reader. Subtle and good.
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:42:00 PM
So beautiful, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/25/2019 6:55:00 PM
Beautiful Frederic. Congratulations on your top placement! : )
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:23:00 PM
Oh, lovely, alluring lines. Wonderful piece Frederick! Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:11:00 PM
Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:15:00 PM
ohh, a beguiling write that swept me right into the lines, frederoc... huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/4/2019 7:16:00 PM
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