Melted*****

when we look at each other my 
heart melts into his hands 
my love never fadesaway 
when i see him when we touch another 
we laugh but when my friends put us down like 
we have nothing my love is stong as long hes
here my heart melts and love never fadesaway when 
he laughs im so into hes so soft spoken and im found by the way 
we talk and laugh to each other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 16, 2009 at 11:07 AM
lol, I did it too... proof read I mean *
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January 16, 2009 at 11:06 AM
great expression. you may want to check and proofread, a couple of your words kind of run together (needs spaced. keep on writing :)
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