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My manager’s voice is booming telling me my deadlines looming overwhelmed I begin to drown Whoop,whoop,whoop, red alert – MELTDOWN! eyes in the office are staring wet excuses I'm declaring I'm paralysed by my boss’ frown Whoop,whoop,whoop, red alert – MELTDOWN! laughter floating like bonfire smoke there's no deadline that was a joke my boss is now the office clown Whoop,whoop,whoop, red alert – MELTDOWN! relieved I find myself smiling work for me no longer piling lets all leave early, go down town Whoop,whoop,whoop, red alert – MELTDOWN!

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Date: 4/18/2014 7:51:00 PM
Cool. I'm investigating this poetic form and your poem came up and it is good. It tells a story and has fun to it. :)
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Rachel Fawcett
Date: 4/22/2014 5:32:00 AM
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Date: 6/8/2013 11:46:00 PM
you conveyed the theme FANTASTICALLY
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