Melt This Cold-Cold Heart

Start softly and build...
Build 'til this frozen heart melts
And breaks so gentle...

("Serenade for Strings" Pt. III: Tchaikovsky)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Wonderful serenade
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 6:49 PM
I could hear this one playing, Tim, such lovely lilting words ... love is wonderful when its ON ... not so wonderful when its OFF... I have had the best and worst of both kinds.. on hiatus right now.. with love ... your poem gives me smiles and offers hope.. I am sure u do not have a cold cold heart.. u write too well... it has to be warm.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Yep....it can melt my heart...turn it into a puddle!! Lovely! The choices you seem to pick, are some of my very favorites !!!!ps....thanks for another chance to listen to Samuel Barber's Adagio....I truly llllllloooove that piece!! :) ~ Carrie
Gorelick Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 12:40 AM
I cant figure out who your talking about..but I sure love this senryu..great work. The last line is perfect. BG
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November 11, 2009 at 12:39 AM
I cant figure out who your talking about..but I sure love this senryu..great work. The last line is perfect. BG
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 9:08 PM
Beautiful write--Charma
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