Melt Down

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an old lady from Gland with idle hands tied her old computer with rubber bands when it finally broke-down she went into a meltdown bought a new one, but couldn't catch the commands 6/4/2018

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Charlie Smith

Date: 6/6/2018 12:43:00 PM

No that feeling, good one Eve...

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/6/2018 10:05:00 AM

Very enjoyable humour ... Hahaha ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2018 6:51:00 PM

haha, I really like this. She almost sounds like ME

Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2018 7:59:00 PM

she is me.. I just bought a new windows 10 pc and it is driving me crazy.. I was already crazy with my laptop I got in Jan. for my birthday same program and I hate it :(

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2018 4:42:00 PM

An entertaining Limerick, Eve! When old-faithful breaks down it is not that easy to switch over to a new one! Hopefully she has a young granddaughter who'll give her a helping hand! Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2018 2:42:00 PM

Oh, you should have told me you wrote a poem about my technology ineptitude. LOL Very witty, Eve! Hugs, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2018 2:09:00 PM

ohh, chuckling all over, eve.. love your humor.. huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/5/2018 5:00:00 AM

She's got to move with the times...and the dance too... but she trying...All the best Eve

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2018 3:30:00 AM

Haha, that brought back a memory for me. The accelarator spring had gone on my works van so I got about ten rubber bands to do a temporary fix, it got me back to the depot before they perished. Tom