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Melt Down

an old lady from Gland with idle hands
tied her old computer with rubber bands
when it finally broke-down
she went into a meltdown
bought a new one, but couldn't catch the commands

6/4/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/6/2018 12:43:00 PM
No that feeling, good one Eve...
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Date: 6/6/2018 10:05:00 AM
Very enjoyable humour ... Hahaha ...
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:51:00 PM
haha, I really like this. She almost sounds like ME
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Date: 6/5/2018 7:59:00 PM
she is me.. I just bought a new windows 10 pc and it is driving me crazy.. I was already crazy with my laptop I got in Jan. for my birthday same program and I hate it :(
Date: 6/5/2018 4:42:00 PM
An entertaining Limerick, Eve! When old-faithful breaks down it is not that easy to switch over to a new one! Hopefully she has a young granddaughter who'll give her a helping hand! Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/5/2018 2:42:00 PM
Oh, you should have told me you wrote a poem about my technology ineptitude. LOL Very witty, Eve! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2018 2:09:00 PM
ohh, chuckling all over, eve.. love your humor.. huggs
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Date: 6/5/2018 5:00:00 AM
She's got to move with the times...and the dance too... but she trying...All the best Eve
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:30:00 AM
Haha, that brought back a memory for me. The accelarator spring had gone on my works van so I got about ten rubber bands to do a temporary fix, it got me back to the depot before they perished. Tom
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