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Melt

Cold hands Abrupt attacks on skin of a furnace Teasing the surface A passionate play through hair standing like stalks of wheat Transferring love Warmth soaking the chill As sun bathes the dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/8/2017 4:15:00 PM
With so little words, you definitely can deliver a powerful picture in my brain. I absolutely love the lines "warmth soaking the chill"it's so textural and sensual...brilliant! Always, Laura
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Kyle Carlson
Date: 11/10/2017 8:41:00 PM
Amazing words, thanks again! I'm actually really proud of this one

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