Melt

Cold hands
Abrupt attacks on skin of a furnace
Teasing the surface 
A passionate play through hair standing like stalks of wheat
Transferring love 
Warmth soaking the chill
As sun bathes the dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 4:15 PM
With so little words, you definitely can deliver a powerful picture in my brain. I absolutely love the lines "warmth soaking the chill"it's so textural and sensual...brilliant! Always, Laura
Carlson Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Amazing words, thanks again! I'm actually really proud of this one
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