Notes About The Poem
In the write below I focus on Mel..That boy who
Became a great man..Who has great spirit and is
Doing well.' There are two other names Tim Ballard
And Ben Swann, ya know there are still heros out
There ' whats the chance they'd be Christian guys?'
Also? Opponents of the demons of hell..)
Mel's a true mate '
What can i ad.? But ya know I won't find enough room..I'll just say formed in Australia.? People he'd bridge the void
Black as doom, give him some applause,
Thats what i'll do' or maybe help some
Children? To grow up ( real true blues')
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