Melody of Sun Rays

Appearing as rays, Sun sends melodies of love, On disgruntled trees. Note: written for Raul Moreno's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 4:01 PM
good job!! enjoyed reading
Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Wonderful Haiku Marty, best of luck in Raul's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Marty. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:37 PM
I love this gentle melody..so beautiful--Charma
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November 18, 2009 at 10:36 PM
recomment..im sorry you lost your Dag Marty,you re in my prayers too-Charma
Richards Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:58 AM
Good luck Marty....this was like a beautiful song! ~ :) Love, Carrie
Townsend Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 11:35 PM
Excellent write. If this is for Raul's contest, great luck to you, if not, it should be! Smiles from Lolita
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