Melody
Notes
Pitch not properly
Beat
Has no craft
Tempo
Has missed out
Counter point
Has lost its point
Harmony
Never took place at all
A gamut
Has abandoned its order
Rendition
Is not in tune with composition
Why is this? What is this?
Though
A lot of people
Do not say categorically
I say
In monotone
“That is life”
I am in search
Of melody
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