Melody

A melody
is a fairy
flying across the lake at dusk
making its magic rain
on the water
causing the tides to break and gently flow
in random, but elegant patterns
to create new lullabies
that have never been written
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Beautiful and melodious, Vermillion. Regards // paul
Gentry Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Back to congratulate you again on your win again. Magical!
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Congrats on your win, Vermillion. I love the imagery.
Ashley Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 5:00 PM
A breathtaking and graceful poem, Vermillion, that causes me to linger and dwell in its beauty.. Congratulations on your excellent win with your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gentry Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Very pretty, Vermillion! Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Oh my Vermillion, this poem is stunningly beautiful. I love it and it is going into my faves! : )
Jeyaseelan Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Really very lovely.....great imagination
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 2:19 PM
This is absolutely beautiful and peaceful! A favorite for me. Thanks for sharing! :)
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