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Melodious Sunset From My Balcony

Birds have started chirping Sun is just about to set Squirrel is squeaking as it scampers on branches of flame tree Bees are buzzing Crows can be heard saying caw, caw Eagle flies with a screeching sound Oriental magpie robins can be seen on flame tree chattering. They sit on a branch, walk towards flowers, drink nectar, fly to another branch, do the same. They want to finish eating before sunset Squawk, squawk, parrots screech as they fly together. It seems they are going to some place to sleep A flock of sparrows can be seen on flame tree. They pluck a petal from flame tree, munch it. Stomach full, they start chirping. Red-vented bulbul whistle melodiously Red whiskered bulbul whistles cheerily Tuk, tuk, tuk sings coppersmith barbet Koyal sings mellifluous music with its koo, koo, koo Suddenly warmth of sun is gone. Cool breeze blows Red sun goes down the mountain to other side Chirping of birds stops No noise can be heard. Absolute silence and peace permeate the surrounds 11.05.2021 Contest Name :The Audience Falls Silent Sponsor : Kai Michael Neumann Premier contest winner 7th position Note: Inspired by Malabika Ray Choudhury's poem "There Was Silence" Click on this link to see above mentioned birds- https://www.cntraveller.in/story/mumbai-birding-balcony-11-birds-spot-colaba-pali-hill-andheri-dadar-coronavirus-quarantine/

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Date: 6/2/2021 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a pretty write from a balcony with the sunset. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day..........
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/2/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/11/2021 2:57:00 PM
Lovely poem, Dear Rama! It is a blessing that you can see sunset from your balcony and hear all those birds chirp in their unique ways! I noticed a familiar name - Bulbul. What can be better for a poet to create, surrounded by nature's peaceful blessings! Love ~ Mala
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/11/2021 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Mala. I added a link,now all can see birds I have written about.Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/10/2021 6:54:00 PM
How lovely it is that you can see sunset from your balcony Rama and hear the sweet sound of the birds too. A wonderful write… Best wishes Belle
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/11/2021 8:22:00 AM
A wonderful comment from a wonderful poet makes my day. Thanks. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/10/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Rama, to watch a sunset from a balcony is a good place to be. To see the pretty colors of the sunset until it is gone. Is a treat. Hugs Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2021 5:19:00 AM
Hello Rama, you have a great view of the sunset. lucky you. Enjoy your day my friend.Hugs.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/11/2021 4:21:00 AM
Yes it is indeed a great. I do it without missing daily. Take care, Hugs

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