Melodious Sunset From My Balcony

Birds have started chirping
Sun is just about to set
Squirrel is squeaking as it scampers on branches of flame tree
Bees are buzzing
Crows can be heard saying caw, caw
Eagle flies with a screeching sound

Oriental magpie robins can be seen on flame tree chattering. 
They sit on a branch, walk towards flowers, drink nectar, fly to another branch, do the same.
They want to finish eating before sunset

Squawk, squawk, parrots screech as they fly together. 
It seems they are going to some place to sleep

A flock of sparrows can be seen on flame tree.
They pluck a petal from flame tree, munch it. 
Stomach full, they start chirping.

Red-vented bulbul whistle melodiously
Red whiskered bulbul whistles cheerily

Tuk, tuk, tuk sings coppersmith barbet
Koyal sings mellifluous music with its koo, koo, koo

Suddenly warmth of sun is gone. 
Cool breeze blows
Red sun goes down the mountain to other side

Chirping of birds stops
No noise can be heard. 
Absolute silence and peace permeate the surrounds


11.05.2021

Contest Name :The Audience Falls Silent
Sponsor : Kai Michael Neumann

Premier contest winner 7th position

Note: Inspired by Malabika Ray Choudhury's poem "There Was Silence"

Click on this link to see above mentioned birds-
https://www.cntraveller.in/story/mumbai-birding-balcony-11-birds-spot-colaba-pali-hill-andheri-dadar-coronavirus-quarantine/
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a pretty write from a balcony with the sunset. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day..........
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care, God bless!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Lovely poem, Dear Rama! It is a blessing that you can see sunset from your balcony and hear all those birds chirp in their unique ways! I noticed a familiar name - Bulbul. What can be better for a poet to create, surrounded by nature's peaceful blessings! Love ~ Mala
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Mala. I added a link,now all can see birds I have written about.Take care, God bless!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:54 PM
How lovely it is that you can see sunset from your balcony Rama and hear the sweet sound of the birds too. A wonderful write… Best wishes Belle
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:22 AM
A wonderful comment from a wonderful poet makes my day. Thanks. Take care, God bless!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Hello Rama, to watch a sunset from a balcony is a good place to be. To see the pretty colors of the sunset until it is gone. Is a treat. Hugs Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Hello Rama, you have a great view of the sunset. lucky you. Enjoy your day my friend.Hugs.
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Yes it is indeed a great. I do it without missing daily. Take care, Hugs
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