Melodies From Far

autumn's champagne sky dreamy clouds float leaves waltz in puce, tangerine, red swirling, twirling, crumbling in breeze whispering tender melodies from far bells chime sublime stream murmurs tale of love August 13, 2022

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/6/2022 3:36:00 PM

Lovely, so peaceful and dreamy <3

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/23/2022 6:29:00 AM

I love the , "stream murmurs tale of love". Exquisitely beautiful line! Blessings.A fave.^___^ JCB

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2022 2:50:00 PM

There are some breathtaking pictures of stream and rivers in my mind - murmuring and meandering - come back in my poems all the time. Thank you for commenting. Welcome back. We missed you. Love ~ Mala

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2022 11:08:00 AM

A breathtaking description of Autumn, I agree with you, this season has a distinct hue , more than all the seasons of the year, it is my favourite time of the year. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2022 2:47:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, Autumn is my favourite time of the year too. I so much enjoy the changing colours of the leaves - so much more vibrant than the usual ones. Thank you for commenting. Love ~ Mala