Melodic Sureal Melodies And Harmoinic Synmphonies

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Creations spectacular cal musical performance.

A band of showy daffodils Sway and Their yellow trumpets Blown by a bellowing wind The Bluebells ring their dainty chiming bells Songsters sing a sweet melodic lullaby Painted Ladies clap their wings Crickets mark out a Ruthmic beat Woodpeckers do paradiddles Bullfrogs provide the bass Bees fill the rests Eyes in the sky in profusion Look down advisedly Bigfoot listens hidden behind a tree The stream trails its silver ribbons Trout jump and splash The fireflies guide visitors to their seats The bluebells ring The songsters above Sing a sweet melody

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 2:12:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful summer write. As a child we had daffodils lining the driveway. It was so pretty. A couple of years ago, we had a woodpecker. Boy, was he noisy. He left.... I wish you would write more... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/30/2024 3:42:00 PM

Your poem is both imaginative and softly surreal yet also captivating. I enjoyed all the images you created (Woodpeckers do paradiddles) with nature's symphony. I especially liked: "Woodpeckers do paradiddles," Haven't seen the word paradiddles in ages....a word my grandmother used quite often. I could imagine fireflies guiding me to my seat. Well done, Peter. Have a splendid weekend, Sara