Melodic Muse

Melodic Muse
________________________

You are peaceful and serene,
babbling like the little stream
How I've grown to love you so
my melodic muse, I've come to know.


You are my favorite  song,
and in my arms, you do belong
I paint your picture in my mind
and rehearse the words, line for line.

Oh, what splendor I do feel,
it almost seems too surreal
but it's you, I adore the most
raise a glass, to you I toast.

My beautiful, Melodic Muse
my hearts stings and hurts with a bruise
could you, not see my plea
the love and thought I gave to thee.

How my heart bleeds for you,
and there's nothing, I can do
beautiful, indeed you are
but I now love you from afar.

Why did you have to leave,
where did you have to go
my heavenly melodic muse
from so very long ago.

8/18/14- Jessica Thompson ( just wanted to write and this came off top of head )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/19/2014 7:34:00 PM
to me Writing off the top of the head is the DEFINITION of Poetry in the Purest Form. Your raw Poetry Prose Flow like serene stream. Let it out like Sardines Free from the tin. Sister! Keep it going, mean, filthy or even clean, Never apologize for your style, cus girl, it's some of the flyest Ive ever seen! That's why you are a favorite of mine! I will email you soon about something Cancer related if you don't mind. Don't worry, It is something very positive, Just not time yet! K? another 7 rate
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 8/19/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thanks JSL, from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate every kind comment etc. You are awesome my friend. Look forward to seeing your email, keep in contact my friend. Take care, Jess :)
Date: 8/19/2014 7:06:00 PM
A beautiful love/hate relationship we have with our muse...very well stated Jess...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/19/2014 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Tim, always warm and kind when leaving comment on my work. I appreciate it my friend. Take care, Jess :) hugs
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